Email: Ask for feedback while priming the pump
Subject: Feedback on our pitch?
Exciting news -- I'm going to be launching a Community Round on Wefunder to raise capital for [company].
I just went live in private, and I'm sharing with a few trusted people to get feedback and ideas on how I could improve the pitch. Let me know if you have any suggestions for me!
Here's the page: https://wefunder.com/[company]
And of course, if you would like to be one of my very first investors, I would not turn down the money :)
Thanks for always believing in me!